安徽新11选5开奖结果 www.lyefzl.com.cn 連貫和緊湊CC（Coherence and Cohesion）
例:Children are too young to distinguish right from wrong. They watch television every day and do not study. They drop out of schools or fight with their peers. It is true that television viewing is not good for children.
例:The Olympics can create a lot of economic benefits and also benefit people's health. People can practise sports every day. They can earn more money because of job opportunities. With physical fitness, they can perform their jobs very well. Their income will also increase, good for the whole country
例:It is undeniable that the government should spend money on art. This is because the government has a lot of money. Obviously, art is important to our life. However, other things cannot be as important as art to us. It comes as no surprise that many countries in the world have spent a lot of money on art.
【淺析】這段話用了大量的連接詞，如“it is undeniable that..." , "this is because..."。然而，這些連接詞都不是很恰當。政府投資藝術為什么就是“無可置疑的”(it is undeniable)。
例:Education has become one of the most controversial issues around the world while many people have a hard time reaching a consensus on the importance of moral education.
【淺析】教育不可能是一個很有爭議的“the most controversial issues”話題，而教育的重要性不是什么方案或者計劃，一不需要得到人們的統一通過“consensus"。模式化的開頭只會引起考官的反感。
例:Individuals and businesses should pay for the clean-up of pollution. If individuals are not held responsible for their behaviour, they will continue to pollute the environment. The government's spending can improve the environment, but it sooner or later runs out of money. If companies are required to pay for pollution reduction methods, they will be more careful about their behaviour.
In addition, if companies and individuals do not bear any cost, they do not have motivation to be environmentally friendly.